EDITING FROM START TO FINISH
Professional eyes on your draft
I offer four levels of editing services, to guide your work from initial draft to final polish.
An editorial assessment is most useful for obtaining ongoing feedback as you write each chapter. It’s like having a professional alpha reader by your side, providing expert guidance on what you’ve written, as well as inline reader reactions to give you a sense of how the story might be received.
This collaborative approach helps you stay on track, refine your ideas, and build a stronger narrative as you progress.
If you’ve already completed your manuscript and don’t want a developmental edit, a full editorial assessment is also available, offering the same insightful feedback for your entire finished work.
A developmental edit, on the other hand, is much more involved, and requires a completed manuscript. This is an investment, not just in your current manuscript, but in YOU as a writer. It is specific. It is detailed. It is EDUCATIONAL. I don’t just tell you what you need to work on, I tell you where, how, and why.
With charts. Graphs. Visual aids. And disco lights.
It is especially important for first-time authors to get this done.
A line edit comes after you know your story structure is sound. Line editing delves into the intricacies of your manuscript, focusing on the sentence-level construction of your writing.
This is where we polish your prose, ensuring clarity, flow, and style. A line edit hones in on word choice, sentence structure, and the overall rhythm of your narrative, making sure your voice shines through with precision and grace.
Line edits also include correcting for spelling, grammar, typos, punctuation, and other mechanical issues.
Proofreading is the final step in the editing process. It involves a meticulous review of your manuscript to catch any remaining errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and formatting. Proofreading ensures that your manuscript is polished and ready for publication, free of distractions that could pull your readers out of the story. This step is crucial to presenting your work in the best possible light, giving you the confidence that your manuscript is as perfect as it can be.
I accept partial manuscripts.
This is a great way to get early feedback on what you have, to ensure you are on the right track – or just to double-check a certain chapter that you are particularly struggling with.
Editorial Assessment
Rate per word- A report summarizing the key strengths and areas for improvement in your manuscript
- Inline reader reaction comments
- Feedback on plot, character, setting, pacing, and dialogue, ensuring your story’s foundation is rock solid.
- Practical, tailored suggestions for improvement, enabling you to take the next steps in refining your manuscript.
- Positive reinforcement highlighting your strengths as a writer.
- Feedback on 38 story elements
- A revision plan
- Scene-by-scene analysis
- Charts and graphs illustrating data on your novel
- Bundle with a book coaching session for 10% off both services
Developmental Edit
Rate is per word- A report summarizing the key strengths and areas for improvement in your manuscript
- Inline reader reaction comments
- Feedback on plot, character, setting, pacing, and dialogue, ensuring your story’s foundation is rock solid.
- Practical, tailored suggestions for improvement, enabling you to take the next steps in refining your manuscript.
- Positive reinforcement highlighting your strengths as a writer.
- Feedback on 38 story elements
- A revision plan
- Scene-by-scene analysis
- Charts and graphs illustrating data on your novel
- A one-hour zoom in which we review your feedback
Line Edit
Rate is per word- Correct spelling, grammar, typos, and syntax while preserving your voice
- Refine sentence structure for clarity and flow
- Enhance word choice for impact and precision
- Ensure clarity and consistency throughout the manuscript
- Align tone and style with your intended audience
- Adjust pacing for a smoother narrative rhythm
- Polish dialogue for natural and engaging conversations
- Remove redundancies to streamline your writing
- Improve transitions between sentences and paragraphs
- Manuscript evaluation services
- Developmental edit services
Proofread
Rate is per word- Correct spelling, grammar, typos, and syntax while preserving your voice
- Refine sentence structure for clarity and flow
- Enhance word choice for impact and precision
- Ensure clarity and consistency throughout the manuscript
- Align tone and style with your intended audience
- Adjust pacing for a smoother narrative rhythm
- Polish dialogue for natural and engaging conversations
- Remove redundancies to streamline your writing
- Improve transitions between sentences and paragraphs
- Manuscript evaluation services
- Developmental edit services
I am a certified Fictionary Story Coach Editor. What this means is that I am trained in using not just the Fictionary Software, but in how to do a developmental edit that is clear, specific, actionable, and kind.
Fictionary Story Coach edits focus on 38 story elements. These elements are evaluated for each and every scene in your manuscript.
You get the big picture view, but you also get analyses and feedback on all your scenes.
Fictionary does not use AI. It is a software system that is powered by humans. Everything is hand-coded into the program in order to get the charts and graphs it produces. However, if you would like to hire me for a full developmental edit, but would prefer I not use this software, I am more than happy to do so.
With Angie’s help I was able to not only assess the quality of my writing, but also confront structural issues present in my work. Plot holes, payoffs, pacing, and more. Her helpful analysis made me more confident than ever in moving to the next stage of my novel.
Using the analytics she provided to me I have already set about building a reliable framework for future changes, and I have shifted a few pivotal scenes to different places in my work to better facilitate a strong narrative progression.
Interested?
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38 story elements
Characters per scene
Point of view
POV character
POV character goal (internal)
POV goal related to plot
What if goal fails?
Scene impact on POV character
Scene impact on protagonist
POV knowledge gained
Characters in motion
Scene name
Story arc
Purpose
Scene opening type
Scene closing type
Anchoring
Entry hook
Exit hook
Tension
Conflict
Revelation
Backstory
Flashback
Scene middle
Scene climax
Action/Sequel
Reader knowledge gained
Location
Date/time
Objects
Sights
Smells
Sounds
Tastes
Touch
Emotional impact
Location split
Weather